The gracious Rochelle at Friday Fictioneers
is challenging us to write something creative
in 100 words or less to go with this photo.
This is my response to that challenge.
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I’ve been married so long, Betsy Ross was my maid of honor!
Our first house was an impressive five-bedroom Colonial with loads of property. Fifty-two years ago it cost $68,000; today that money can buy a car.
The house was white with navy blue trim and a red door. As an excited new homeowner and proud American, I planted red and white impatiens and coral red begonias in all the window boxes.
There was no white picket fence but we did have a proper flagpole and hoisted Old Glory every morning …. much to the chagrin of my communist next-door neighbor.
NAR©2024
100 Words
This is “Our House” by Crosby, Stills & Nash
All text, graphics and videos are copyright for The Sicilian Storyteller, The Elephant’s Trunk and The Rhythm Section and is not for use by anyone without permission. NAR©2017-present.
I remember my grandparents talking about buying their first houses in San Francisco for $5,000. My house now, in much less expensive Reno, is almost 100 times that.
My mom loves “Our House.” I have a recording of my dad covering that he intended to give to my mom for her birthday. He didn’t make it that long. I finally cleaned up the audio and gave it to her along with other songs he recorded for Christmas last year.
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That an incredibly beautiful thing to do, Nobbi. Was your dad a professional singer? I’m sure your mom was beyond thrilled with a gift like that!
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No, he was a professional gardener who loved playing his guitar and idolized Bob Dylan. If you’re interested, I used him in the background of this story, https://nobbinblog.wordpress.com/2023/07/26/friday-fictioneers-ghosts-of-his-guitar/ It actually reminded me of the recordings I had and got me started on the project. I think my mom was eventually thrilled, but she couldn’t listen to it right away. It started her on a mission to find tapes he may have had.
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That was excellent! It’s plain to see why your mom was thrilled by this.
There’s a song for every story.
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Thank you. He recorded it on somebody’s hand-me-down computer. I set him up but didn’t teach him how to record. He was either too far away from the mic, didn’t do anything to deaden the sound, recorded way too quietly, or a combination. Unfortunately, I only have one good quality recording of him that I recorded for a project for me.
And a story for every song.
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It’s amazing how much has changed, even in my own lifetime…
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And sadly, not much for the better.
Thank you, Anonymous 😶🌫️
~ Nancy
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Dear Nancy,
Your last line had me laughing out loud. I also understand patriotism becoming jaded. Love the song and your story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So glad you enjoyed my story, Rochelle! Laughter is one of many simple pleasures to be shared with others.
Peace 🕊️
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The house reflected who you were, and that’s a good thing. If our homes can show a little of our individuality, then we’ll have interesting neighbourhoods – better than the streets and streets of cloned houses that seem to pop up in new housing developments. Nicely told.
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Thank you, Margaret. We like to call them Stepford Homes. My sister lives in a lovely community where every town house is exactly the same and there are specific rules to follow when personalizing the outside. I get lost every time I visit just trying to find her house! It’s like being in a Twilight Zone episode.
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This was a nice nostalgic look back. Life always seemed to innocent ‘back then’. I had to smile because the issue of displaying a flag was an issue of contention in an HOA I used to be a part of.
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Lovely nostalgic post
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Thanks, Sadje. Amazing the memories these photos evoke.
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Yes sometimes it’s most unexpected
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These days raising any flag seems to be contentious, even that of your own country. Nice piece of nostalgia.
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Exactly right, Sandra …. more’s the pity.
Thanks for your thoughts.
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sounds like a dream home and at a good price, too! 🎀🎈🤩🤩
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Both true at the time, CA.
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It is said, that home is where the heart is. I enjoyed the enthusiasm and excitement that came across in the story, very true.
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Hit return too early.
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I do subscribe to that adage, James.
Pleased to know you enjoyed my story. Thanks!
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Cute story, Nancy. Back in the day, nobody considered that one day home prices would make ownership unattainable. It’s one of the most broken things (after no universal health care) in the U.S. Food, clothing, and shelter are a right of every American citizen. Two out of 3 isn’t bad, but we can do better.
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Excellent point, Lisa. We can definitely do better; there is no acceptable reason for homelessness.
Thanks for sharing your comments.
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My pleasure, Nancy.
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So very patriotic of you ;-) I don’t doubt it was lovely. And a first home always holds a special place in our hearts. Love this song.
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Thanks, Dale; I love this song, too.
Yes, we were very patriotic …. until we became disillusioned and jaded. 🤣
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So good.
I hear ya, my friend.
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It does seem like something from the distant past now. Times have certainly changed.
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That they have, Iain, and sadly, not for the better.
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Stars and Stripes
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Gee, I could have gone with Jimmy Cagney and “Yankee Doodle Dandy”!
I’ll wait till July 4th for that.
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A good take on the prompt, thank you.
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Thanks, Heather. Glad you think so.
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Did your neighbor hoist a hammer and sickle flag in retaliation?
Your house seems to me to be a patriotic statement. I love it!
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Yes, with a big fist it the air, too!
It was a statement house, back when such a policy wasn’t an invitation for trouble.
Thanks!
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It’s a very, very, very fine post. 💕
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I see what you did there, girlfriend! Well done❣️
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😉
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There was a COMMUNIST next door neighbour? Not just a Democrat?
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I don’t approve of political jokes.
I’ve seen too many get elected!
🐘
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Such sweet memories 💖
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It really was a nice house, David
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🤍 Nancy 🤍 ~ sounds like it
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