Denise at GirlieOnTheEdge has challenged us
to write a Six Sentence Story using the word “heart”;
this is my six sentence response.
If only I could touch you,
gently caress your face
and look deeply into your eyes.
If only I could sweetly kiss your mouth
softly like a butterfly on a flower petal
and linger there breathing quietly against your lips.
If only I could run my hands slowly down your arms
and entwine my fingers with yours,
feeling your heart beating against my chest.
If only I could lay beside you
as you run your fingers through my hair,
my bare leg splayed across yours.
If only I could give you my heart
but you are a mere fantasy
and that, I fear, will never change.
If only.
NAR©2024
This is The Platters with “Only You”
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What’re you doing in my head?!
Seriously, a sensuous piece so beautiful and genuine it hurts just a little bit. Well done!
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Every once in a while she comes out.
Thanks, Liz.
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It’s hard to avoid the temptation to dream your life away.
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For sure! Those fantasies can carry us away!
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This is beautifully. Well done, Nancy!
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Thanks so much, Chris.
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That’s beautiful, with such an aching sense of longing.
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Thank you so much, Iris.
Delighted to know you enjoyed this one.
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I loved it. I enjoy all your short stories and poetry.
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You are most kind, Iris!
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A sweet and delicate daydream. 💞 The song is a lovely pairing, Nancy. 🎶
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Thank you, Michele. The song is one with a lot of meaning for me.
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You’re welcome. 😊 I love learning that, Nancy. Thank you.
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With hope may it change.
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If Only indeed.
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The music sure helps, doesn’t it? 😄
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definitely
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(Six Sentence enhancing) song of the week, fer sure!
a good ‘un.
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Romance Overload. I’m not complaining.
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Very beautiful and amazing to read 💓
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Very nice to know that, Sanjeet. Thank you.
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Oh so lovely. And the song is perfect background.
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Thanks, D. I’m in an oldie music mood today.
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If only dreams did come true. A sensuous piece indeed.
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It’s all those romantic oldies we’ve been listening to. 🥰
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Remain open to reality, though that fantasy is a hard act to follow.
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True enough; they usually are!
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Such a poignant and beautiful story Nancy. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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