
Invisible in the temporary stillness before dawn, the trio of soldiers crept silently through the jungle. One had an injured leg as the result of a skirmish; he knew his injury would impede their progress and he pleaded with his comrades to leave him to die alone with dignity. The steadfast friends refused to abandon him in the middle of enemy territory.
Walking on, the soldiers spotted a tall thicket in the distance where they could take shelter. Painstakingly, one soldier carried his injured brother on his back into the copse while the third searched for something for them to eat. Finally for the first time in hours the exhausted trio was able to get some rest.
After a while, the wounded soldier awoke with a fever, his leg swollen and throbbing. Since it was now midday, it was too risky to leave their cover. Outside was sweltering and humid and the chance of them being caught would be great. No … they would stay where they were until it was safe to venture out.
Suddenly their wounded brother heaved a ragged breath and died. Grief-stricken, yet aware they must move on, the soldiers covered their comrade with rocks and began the slow crawl out. Without warning a long carnivorous caterpillar slithered through the brush and swallowed the startled army ants. They struggled bravely, as courageous ants are wont to do, but in the end they could not prevail.
Poor little buggers.
NAR © 2023
Bravo, Nancy! Fantastic imagination and creative perspective. 🐜🐛
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Thanks so much, Michele. I’m pleased you enjoyed this one.
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You are welcome, Nancy. I enjoy all of your creative work! 😊
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Carnivorous caterpillars, Nancy?
Jings and crivvens, lassie, one more thing to have nightmares about!
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Aye, they’re real enough.
You’d be wise to check the bedsheets tonight!
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Great twist there. You got me 100%.
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Thanks so much! I love the little twists, don’t you?!
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You’re welcome and yes 🙂
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Aw… After all that! 😳😥
You sent me off in a totally different direction there, Nancy, you pesky writer, you! 🤣😉
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After all that … to end up as lunch! 🐛
Thanks, Tom. My friend Nick has coined the twist at the end The Sicilian Curve Ball. I’m rather fond of that! ⚾️
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It’s a good phrase! 👍
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Poor little buggers indeed. Hopefully, there’s a bird sitting on a branch ready to snap up that caterpillar.
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Justice for the buggers!
Ever since the caterpillars ravished my tomato plants, I’ve no use for them.
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Caterpillars! They’re still chewing on my box plants. Just awful little things.
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A nice story, Nancy! I always love the twist at the end.
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Thanks, KK! I love the fun of the unexpected twist as well. Thanks for sharing your thoughts today!
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Very clever, I like how you allowed the ant its dignity in death
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Thanks, Deb. That’s a very interesting point you make!
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What a nice twist! You got me.
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It’s nice to know I “got you” and that you enjoyed this one, Bridgette. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Well, you sure got me with that one, Nancy!
Didn’t see it coming.
And not even a happy ending for the 2 comrades.
Wow, ‘Poor little buggers’ indeed!
Nice one.
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Thanks, Jenne! You know how much I enjoy a good curve ball. So glad you enjoyed this one!
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Poor, poor li’l comrades in arms, …great twist, …loved it…✨👏✨
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I know! They struggled till the bitter end. Glad you enjoyed this one, Penn!
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I did, …and I just didn’t Ant-icipate the ending, …(groan..🫣)
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Excellent! 😂
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Great story! We were infested with army worms a while back…
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Thanks, John!
Army worms – sounds dreadful! We had huge caterpillars one year that devastated all my tomato plants. Even though they are very large, it’s difficult to see them because they’re green and hide on the underside of the leaves. Seemingly overnight they ate their way through all my tomato plants. Very discouraging.
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In our case, our lawn suddenly looked like it had gone dormant (we have Bermuda grass), and it was in the summer, when t should have been green. We called the lawn service, they came out and explained that’s what army worms do, they eat the green off of the grass. He treated the lawn for them and it came back in a couple of weeks.
Bummer about your tomatoes. Did you get any tomatoes off the plants?
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Nice story, Nancy.
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Thanks, Jim. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Did not see that coming! But when I read again, the clues were right there. Excellent!
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Funny how that happens, isn’t it? So glad you enjoyed the story, Liz!
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Writing skills clearly seen!
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Detailed. Good one!!
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Thanks, Sanjeet!
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Very clever N.! You got me!
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Thanks, D! I love hearing that! Glad you enjoyed my little story. 🐜
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Itsy bitsy story…
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Oh no! Poor ants 🐜
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It’s a jungle out there, Sadje!
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😅
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