Written for Fandango’s Story Starter #239 –
“It started with a chance meeting on a film-set” –
and for Missy’s MAD Challenge #085 where the theme is
“A memory you’ve never had suddenly becomes
vivid and real”. Here’s where the prompts took me.
It started with a chance meeting on a film set.
She was an extra …. background talent, they called it, which always struck Maurice as a kind way of saying furniture. He was the cinematographer, and he noticed her the way he noticed everything: through the geometry of light and shadow. She stood at the edge of a crowd scene, and something about the angle of her jaw made him set down his light meter and simply look.
“You’ve been on this lot before,” he said. Not a question.
She turned. “First time.”
He didn’t argue, but his hands had gone cold.
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That night, in the deep quiet of his editing suite, it came for him.
A kitchen. Yellow walls. The smell of burnt toast and citrus. A woman …. the extra from today, but younger, maybe seven or eight years old …. sitting across from him at a table with a crack running through its center. She was laughing at something he’d said. Outside, a screen door banged in the wind.
He knew that kitchen. He knew the crack in that table, knew he’d once balanced a marble in it for twenty minutes. He knew the screen door needed a new spring. He knew all of it, and none of it had ever happened.
The memory was vivid in a way that real memories rarely are …. no soft edges, no gaps. It arrived fully lit, in focus, every frame held.
He sat for a long time with his hands in his lap.
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The next morning Maurice found her in the catering line.
“I think I know you,” he said, because the only honest thing left was the strange thing.
She poured her coffee slowly. When she looked up, there was no surprise on her face …. only something that looked like sad relief.
“I’ve been waiting,” she said, “for you to remember.”
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Her name was Trina. They sat for two hours at a corner table while the set hummed and clattered around them, and she told him what his parents had never found the courage to.
That they had been placed together in a foster home on Allerton Avenue when Maurice was six and Trina was seven. That the kitchen had yellow walls and a cracked table and a screen door that always banged. That for fourteen months they had been, in every way that mattered, brother and sister.
That when Maurice was adopted, he was told Trina had moved far away. That Trina was told the same about him. That the woman who ran the home had simply found it tidier that way …. two children, two clean breaks, no loose threads.
Maurice listened without speaking. He was thinking about the marble. How he had balanced it in that crack for twenty minutes while Trina timed him on a pink plastic wristwatch. How winning had felt like the best thing in the world, and how she had cheered as though it was her victory.
“I never forgot you,” Trina said.
Outside, somewhere on the lot, a door swung open in the wind and banged shut against its frame.
Maurice heard it the way you hear something that has always been true.
“I forgot everything,” he said. “I’m sorry.”
Trina shook her head slowly. “You were six. And you’re here now.”
She said it simply, like it was enough. And sitting there in the noise and light of a place built entirely from illusions, Maurice found that it was.
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Lovely Nancy
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A great story, Nancy. Thanks for joining in again this week.
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