Written for Fandango’s Story Starter #154
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āāIt wasnāt that long ago when Ethan was rarely bothered by mosquitos, but this year heās being eaten alive by themā.ā
I wrote that in my diary just a few weeks ago.
Thank you all for joining us today as we say āfarewellā to my beloved husband, Ethan ā¦. another innocent victim struck down in the prime of life by the dastardly mosquito. Ethan was attacked last week while bringing out the trash for pick-up in the morning; it was just a quick run to the curb but he didnāt have his EpiPen on him. Who knew just a few moments later heād be in cardiac arrest from anaphylactic shock?
Ethan was never bothered by mosquitos before and at first it was just an annoying surprise when he started developing a reaction a few months ago. The change in him was sudden and drastic and, as much as I will miss him, Iām so thankful his time of suffering was short.
Doctors canāt say whether this is a genetic trait, if our children Evan, Ella and Emily will develop this horrible allergy. To help our children realize the seriousness of this situation and to protect them, Ethan has left them his award-winning collection of swatters, his supply of EpiPens, his boxes of citronella candles, his stash of DEET and, of course, his journal.
When the allergic reactions started, Ethan began writing down his thoughts; as a poet, he wrote some of his best work over the recent months. He was most evocative in his agony.
In closing I would like to read one of his most poignant poems. Itās called āOde To The Mosquitoā. And please .ā¦ next time you see a mosquito, ask yourselves āWhat would Ethan do?ā“
Ode To The Mosquito
How can such a little thing
Be so damn annoying?
Flying round my arms and legs
Itās bothersome and cloying.
Go away, you vile thing
Iāll swat you with a stick.
Youāre not welcome in my home
You nasty little prick!
Who would think that tiny guy
Could be such a bloody sucker?
When he sticks his fangs in me
I scream āYou Motherf*#+er!ā
You get me every time Iām out;
My blood is extra sweet.
Come and get me, little twit!
Tonight Iām packing DEET!
The end. š¦
NARĀ©2024
Poem originally posted 2022
This is āThe Mosquitoā by The Doors
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Thanks! So glad you like this one!
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Most welcome.
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Hilarious š
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Haha! Little suckers!
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Tis the season! Good one Nancy! š
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Tis indeed! Thanks, Tiffany!
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That was highly entertaining, Nancy. What a way to die! š And I never heard this Doors song before. My husband gets swarmed by those suckers! They left me alone for years, but have shown more interest lately. š¤
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It’s a pretty obscure song; I was thrilled I remembered it.
The skeeters love me and I usually get bitten after just a few minutes outside!
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Maybe Italian blood is sweeter? š My husband is also Italian and has the same problem.
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Maybe they’re attracted to the wine in our blood! š
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Hahaha! I love the poem! Great story Nance! š
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Thanks, CA!! I had lots of fun with this one!
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ššš Everything is so trippy here. And I’m gobsmacked by the previously unknown Doors song! š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦
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Hahaha!! What a fun comment, Liz! I love laying down new music for my friends!
No me moleste mosquito!! š¦
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A new Doors song to me as I stopped listening after Other Voices. This song reminds me of the Bat Man theme.
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Interesting. I’ll have to listen again.
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Thankfully, we don’t get many ‘mozzies’ over here.
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You’re so lucky! They really suck!
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Goosebumps!
Geez, Nancy that featured image made me itch. Those suckers on that personās limb are fat! š¬
I hate mosquitos but truth be told, if thereās a mosquito in the house it goes straight to my husband. Skipping me.
I hear they go for folks with š °ļø type blood. š¤·š½āāļø
Your story made me so sad. I didnāt know where you were coming from.
Then I knew. š®āšØ tremendous šš½
And the poemāoh my! How splendidly you wrote that. hats off to you. Perfecto, Amiga! So cool, youā¦ wowed me.
Thanks for sharing. Iāll sleep well tonight knowing this is all made up and no oneās getting devoured by those annoying blood suckers. Good night.
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Haha! No devouring today, Selma, but those buggers sure do like to suck on me! ZAP!! ā”ļø
I love the Italian word for mosquito …. zanzara. It’s such fun to say!
Ciao, amica mia!
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They definitely do like some flesh better than others.
Love the poem!
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Thanks, D! That was a fun write!
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Some people are more tasty than others… I love when I’m sitting next to a tastier than me person.
Could you imagine being allergic to skeeters? Holy shit.
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Well, then you’d love sitting next to me! I hate those blasted suckers!
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They can be so awful. Ugh.
The “no-see-ems”? My mother’s hubby would get attacked mercilessly. We’d all be sitting outside and he’d be cursing and swatting and we would look at him with a “what’s your problem?”. He’d reply with “les osties de brĆ»lots”. I guess they are also called biting midges? They’re teeny tiny.
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Like those itsy bitsy sand flies at the beach. They’re like flying piranha!
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Yes!! When we went to Costa Rica, it was the first and only time, we stuck around the pool. Those who went to the beach came back with their legs, from the knees down, looking like they got the pox!
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How I spent by summer vacation! No thanks!!
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Nope. I’ll pass.
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I so enjoyed reading this (once I realised it was fictitious!) even though I am now itching all over!
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Haha! The power of suggestion is amazing. Keep those swatters handy! š¦
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I’m so sorry for your loss.
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Yikes! I do hope you are aware that this is all made up just for fun!
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I forgot to add “šš¤£š”
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Great writing! I especially love the very witty poem.
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That’s an oldie that I always liked and I’m glad I remembered it when I read Fandango’s story starter sentence. Thanks, Sweets!
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A very witty response, Nancy. I must say that I have a lot of empathy with Ethan. Those little motherf*#+ers are doing a job in me this year, too.
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Thanks, Fan! I’ve always been bait for those suckers!
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I always found it odd (maybe not lol….just glad)
that everyone in my home gets their share of mosquitoes from time to time except mešlol.
It so annoys them š¤
nicely done, Nancy š¤
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Consider yourself very lucky!
Thanks, Destiny š¦
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I know š¤
pleasure š¤
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Super silly š
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Hehehe! Sometimes the silliness just needs to come out! š
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One day, when the devil was very bored and wanted to try his hand at minimalism, he created a masterpiece: mosquitoes.
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Haha! Very good!
I see you can relate, my friend! š¦
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Oh, I sure can – relate to the devil and the moscitoes š
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